Saturday, 2 February 2008

Poetry

Saturday night, Juice in hand!!!  lol changed day's.
I have decided to share some more poems.
I hope you enjoy them and will let me know what you think.

 

Distant Sun 

You never know what tomorrow will bring.
Just as sure as there's summer, there's spring.
All we seem to do is live in hope
And do our best to try and cope.

You never know you've loved until you've lost.
You give away far too much of your trust.
We can watch all our friends crying,
But close your eyes to our world cos it's dying
.

Our world is now very frightening,
It's so sad to see it this way,
All that's left is all of this fighting,
All that we can do now is pray.

You never know when it's your turn to go,
Just as sure as there's winter, there's snow,
We can watch all the bird's flying,
But close your eyes to our world cos It's dying.


Sunless Day's

When your heart is beating fast,
Your mind, It wanders to the past.
All that's left of yesterday.
Goodbye my friend so far away.

The love we had, has gone for good.
You never knew or understood,
What life was like for me inside
And how I felt just like a child.

You took great pride in teaching me
The things in life, which were meant to be.
It's such a shame you never said,
What was soon to lie ahead.

Goodbye  

It's time to move on now.
There's nothing left for me here.
A new beginning, A fresh start,
An open road, A goodbye tear.

It's time to move on now,
Leaving won't be so hard to do.
I know if I leave now,
Then my dream will come true.

I'm sorry if this will hurt you,
But, there's no other way I know,
I won't ever forget you.
The hardest part in leaving,
Is letting you go.


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12 comments:

jeadie05 said...

Very good , but very sad ,who are these written for I wonder ...love Jan xx

wwfbison said...

I enjoyed reading them although they are so sad.
Lisa

andrewfrnd said...

Very sad but still very good indeed. Have you ever had any of your work published?

Andy xxx

cayasm said...

Loved these Pam thanks for sharing with us.

Yasmin
xx

bhbner2him said...

Beautiful work!  Moving and touching.  -  Barbara

carolelainedodd said...

How sad, but lovely.
Thanks for sharing.
Carolxx

astoriasand said...

Lovely words very good I enjoyed reading these Pam.Take Care God Bless Kath astoriasand http://journals.aol.co.uk/astoriasand/MYSIMPLERHYMES

lv2trnscrb said...

you write very well; I enjoyed all;Distant Sun was my favorite

betty

preciousone25 said...

Wow.... these really touched my heart!!!

Joann

helmswondermom said...

Very good!  I especially liked the third one.
Lori

jmoqueen said...

They are lovely ~ thank you for sharing them with us xx

Jenny

http://journals.aol.co.uk/Jmoqueen/MyLife

shrbrisc said...

They are so beautiful !
hugs
Sherry